WWW - You've pinched out some good approach of the clip in places, particularly in terms of the mime element. However, this is still a long way short of where we want to be...
EBI- There is a lack of depth and detail throughout. Just not enough analysis for the higher levels.
- Don't repeat wording from the question paper... you'll never get marks for this.
- Lack of media theory and terminology.
- Organisation lacking, you want three (or more) well- developed, well- planned paragraph for each Q
Family is represented within the advert as close nit, to emphasise the importance of easily that can vanish due to a car crash. A strong team is presented when they all worked together to make up a family.
Dyers lines of appeal theory suggests that the family within the video fall under the category of ''happy families''. This means
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